Betty Renwick
9/23/08
Since i've been an astronut for about a few years now i've seen alot of things. I've introduced people to new things also. But this year inparticular there has been a requested voyage to the undiscoverd. My boss has asked me to lead that voyage. Me, being the brave person that i'm, i'm more then willing to lead this voyage. Very little know about this part of outer space. Heck as many years i've been an astronaut, i dont even know about this place. When my boss proposed the question to me i was in shock!! But then i became excited. I thought this might be a great opportunity to see new and exciting things. I've always been a fan of exploring anyway. Also this good be a way of learning something new. But, then at the same time this could be a little dangerous. Younever know what might be out there waiting for you. A viscous alleian might be on the loose, or something might just go wrong. But i guest those are the chances astrnauts ahve to be willing to take. With the braveness that lies in me, i 'm pretty much ready for anything. So, the undiscovered, be ready to become discovered!!!
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I love the way you wrote this post as if you are really the astronaut! Good details to defend your argument as well.
Quite a lot of small errors that you can fix for more points. You may want to type your work in Word first to catch the small errors, and then copy and paste the paragraph into blogger. As is 17/20 points.
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